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Sunday, 18 January 2015

just turned eighteen - Draft Opening


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4kCWOhV22SI&feature=youtu.be

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We were criticised for using a few too many scenes involving walking in and out of doors so we had to get rid of a scene where Taylor-Eve and Viki were walking to their class; this scene was also removed for the fact that Taylor and Viki looked at the camera for a split second and the tracking shot was shakey due to the camera being handheld.

During editing we realised that our film had gone over the two minute limit that our teacher had given us. We decided that the following clips were not as important as the rest and cut them out:
  • Bullying Scene with Ian
  • Taylor-Eve winking at the camera after "borrowing" money from Viki.

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